Monday, August 30, 2021
my alien
Meet Jim he's my alien. Jim moved to another planet with rainbows and magical things. I'm trying to convince Jim to come to earth. One reason is earth has lots of different foods and animals .Jim loves animals. He is a very nice alien. Another reason is we have amazing sites to see. We also have lots of different states and counties. I can't see why he dose not want to move. My last reason is earth is the only planet with organic life.
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Hi Carys, Jim is very cool and I have to say so is his cat. You have given great reasons for him to come and visit. . Do you know what planet Jim is from? I'd love to know what planet he's from and what his planet looks like perhaps you could find out. I'll keep a check on your blog. I love how you've used lots of colour keep up the good work.
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Kia ora Carys,
ReplyDeleteJim looks very friendly and nice. You have thought of so many good reasons for Jim to come to earth! The picture of Jim is a really cool as well. Maybe you could conclude it with a statement, just to really convince Jim that Earth is worth coming to. Keep up the amazing work over lockdown!
Josh Knight (Intern Teacher)
Kia ora Carys,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story about Jim. He looks like a very friendly alien. I like that you added colours to your writing. The rainbow of colours is wonderful, though I did find the yellow hard to read.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader